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I remember when...... by ~the-unwanted-love:iconthe-unwanted-love:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I remember when you held me in your arms,
telling me that I was the only one for you.
I remember when you kissed me,
telling all your friends that I belonged to you.
I remember when you held my hand,
telling all my friends that you belonged to me.
I also remember when I caught you,
with one of the girls that I once knew.
I remember when you were telling her,
the things that you once told me.
I remember when you found out that I knew,
you came running asking for forgiveness.
But the thing that I remember the most is when
you never told me…… that you loved me.
©2006-2009 ~the-unwanted-love
:iconthe-unwanted-love:

Author's Comments

This is my first time actually posting any kind of art or........ writing a poem like this XD most my friends said that they like it....... so it must be good.......!! i don't really know..


I remember when..... was written by Katherine Chicas

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~icupcake Mar 17, 2006, 6:17:48 PM
nice kathy. ^^ i had no idea u could post poems on deviantart. :D i might put some of mine up(when im not being too lazy, lol) :)
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~the-unwanted-love Mar 17, 2006, 8:25:02 PM
THANK You :hug: :sigh: u better get unlazy quick girl because u got good poems :hits upside the head:

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Its always the darkness that Keeps me sane...
And Its always the light that shines away from me...
So which of the two am I suppose to look more forward to?
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~icupcake Mar 23, 2006, 3:34:55 PM
lol ::rubs head:: ouch ;_;
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~the-unwanted-love Mar 23, 2006, 5:33:17 PM
it was meant to hurt

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Its always the darkness that Keeps me sane...
And Its always the light that shines away from me...
So which of the two am I suppose to look more forward to?
:iconicupcake:
~icupcake Mar 27, 2006, 2:56:23 PM
well good then, u got ur purpose(bonks you on the head with nwspaper and sesshy doll) HA! HOW DO U LIKE THAT! :D :P

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oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why are you reading this???
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~icupcake Mar 27, 2006, 2:57:02 PM
0.O WTF! I did the wrong smile! XP i hate when that happens! i meant

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oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why are you reading this???
:iconicupcake:
~icupcake Mar 27, 2006, 2:58:49 PM
(contenuing from last post which i accidently sent XP)...';P' not ':P'.

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oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why oh why are you reading this???
:iconthe-unwanted-love:
~the-unwanted-love Mar 27, 2006, 4:19:59 PM
HUH

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Its always the darkness that Keeps me sane...
And Its always the light that shines away from me...
So which of the two am I suppose to look more forward to?
:iconthe-unwanted-love:
~the-unwanted-love Mar 27, 2006, 4:20:27 PM
:sigh:

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Its always the darkness that Keeps me sane...
And Its always the light that shines away from me...
So which of the two am I suppose to look more forward to?
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